_ Progression onto Thesis Project

The next and final focus of the year entails my thesis project. This will take the form of re-designing Lincoln Train Station. Below is the A4 working manifesto document we are required to produce which highlights some of my aims and my narrative for the project.

Focus now begins on getting stuck into producing an A3 document for January that includes a substantial insight into: _site analysis _ the buildings brief _ design issues. 

Images and development to follow . . . 

_ Review on Presentation

Just got back from a tutorial with my group tutor Steve Morant and a review of my final presentation with my year tutor Bob Felix.

Steve's comments: more detail to be taken on the floor plans ie. better entrance areas, suggestion of lobby entrances and use for cafe of external area?

_Floor plan presentation to include more labeling, of adjoining Marriott Hotel Site and other buildings. 

_Change of furniture colour to emphasise the main walls. 

_Suggestions of more potential floors? Storage and cleaning areas in the art studio areas.

_The building to adopt a more design type image to suite its use for example, what would happen if the railings were to be designed by a graffiti artist?? Interesting!!

A some important elements to consider and investigate into.

Review with Bob:

Generally a satisfactory review. Elements noted included:

_to check my presentation and make sure all colours are legible when printed, screen to print discrepancies!

_small inclusion  of redefinition work. 

_Replacement.mix up of group site plan.

_Make sure all elements are labeled- sketches, images.

_Check floor plan, means of escape, where the WC's are located- floor planning element!

_*Important factor was he felt that there was an element of process missing from my sketches to my final design. I understand that as I did not include earlier designs, models, and sketches that I will remedy.

A number of areas to sort out and will result in changes to sheets etc.

_ Presentation for Briggates Urban Art Museum

Below is my individual final presentation for an Urban Arts Centre on Briggate following my group Definition and Redefinition. . .

Review comments to follow . . . 

_ Final Model renders

_3D modeling . . .

. . . sketch development

Sketch drawings illustrating the development of my proposal . . .